Redundancy

কোন Sentence এ একই অর্থসম্পন্ন word বা অভিব্যক্তির অহেতুক পুনরাবৃত্তিকে Redundancy বলে। বাংলায় তা বাহুল্য দোষ হিসেবে পরিচিত।

Rule:

     Redundant word যুক্ত সকল sentence -ই  incorrect

a. Incorrect: she  repeated  the words  again.

Correct: She repeated the words. 

b. Incorrect:   He  will  return back  soon.

Correct:  He will return nbsp;  soon.

c. Incorrect: They reverted the man back.

Correct:  They   reverted the man.

d. Incorrect :   we  joined  together  in a  meeting.

Correct: we joined   in a meeting

e. Incorrect : The  two  rivals  competed  together.

Correct : The  two  rivals  competed. 

f. Incorrect : we  advanced  forward.

Correct : we  advanced. 

g. Incorrect: The mountain climbers proceeded forward.

Correct: The mountain climbers proceeded. 

h. Incorrect: The course allows students to progress forward at their own speed.

Correct : The course  allows  students  to progress  at  their  own  speed.

i. Incorrect: I know the time when he will come.

Correct : I  know   when  he will  come.

j. Incorrect :  I know the place  where  he lives.

Correct:  I know where he lives

j. Incorrect:  This is a new innovation.

Correct: This is an   innovation.

k. Incorrect:  The ideas are same identical.

Correct:  The ideas are same. 

l. Incorrect: The water is sufficient enough for them.

Correct: The water is sufficient   for them.

m. Incorrect: He came  here  for  the  purpose  of helping  me.

Correct:  He came here for helping me.

n. Incorrect :  I could  not attend   the meeting  due to the  fact  that  I was  ill.

Correct : I could  not attend  the meeting because I was  ill

o. Incorrect :  we discussed  about  the economic  condition  of Bangladesh.

Correct: we discussed the economic condition of Bangladesh.

Redundancy - unnecessary phrases

a. Incorrect:  Mr.  Davis knows a great deal in terms of the condition of the situation.

Correct: Mr.  Davis knows a great deal of the situation.

b. Incorrect :  It  was  a problem  which  was  very  difficult in  character  and  very  delicate  in nature.

Correct : It  was  a problem  which  was  very  difficult and  very  delicate. 

c. Incorrect:  The disease was very serious in the nature of it.

Correct: The disease was very serious.

d. Incorrect:  Mary had always behaved in a responsible manner.

Correct : Mary  had  always  behaved  in a responsible.

Redundancy – Repetition of noun by   pronoun:

a. Incorrect:  Steve  he  plans  to  go  into business with  his father.

Correct: Steve plans to go into business with his father.

b. Incorrect:  My sister   she found  a store   that imported  food  from our country.

Correct:   My sister found a store   that imported food from our country.